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the fire that burns II

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I really love this series and i like this one probably the best out of the whole series but it isn't without some very minor flaws.

Firstly the sticks/twigs in front of the camera. I think the ones in closer to the model are fine because they focus in and are really part of the photo but the ones right in front of the camera are really distracting and pull me away from admiring the model. Whether you could have snapped them off or moved them aside i am not sure as i wasn't there, but that might be something to consider for next time.

In terms of the model i think she is near flawless, looks amazing and is engaged by the camera. her left hand looks a little awkward in that pose as her hand isn't resting on anything but that is a minor detail.

Overall i love the photo and it was a pleasure to see some of your work!

Critique #14 of 365 days of Critiques!